A young girl, all of sixteen,
Huddled up in a corner;
She’d sit there, waiting,
Hoping, somebody would call her.
She had friends, galore,
Everybody knew her name;
But most didn’t talk to her anymore,
Things, had begun to change.
She fell, in a pit deep,
Couldn’t get out, needed help;
Nobody could see her weep,
Because, everybody had left.
She called out, but in vain,
Nobody seemed to care enough;
None empathized with her pain,
Maybe, all she needed was a hint of love.
The young girl, is now nineteen,
Still lonely in a crowded world;
Till date, she remains unseen,
I know, because I’m that girl.
MAJOR UPDATE: This poem got selected for publication in a poetry anthology, out of over 800 poems! This is my first published poem, as of 2019.
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Wow! Love it… π
Keep the good work up buddy!
God Bless You.
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Sis u r so talented…keep up
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I love the poem. So much related. It’s depressive, isolated and lost.
I’m gonna share a little experience of mine…
Seek first the kingdom of God
Everything shall be added unto you
Happiness, love and wisdom…
I wish you a very happy life
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Nice Aditti π
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Good job. Keep on coming
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It’s so good π
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It’s so good π
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It’s really nice!β€οΈ Kinda what I feel everyday…
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Hello, thank you for the appreciation! Sad to know you’re going through this too. But you’re not alone. We’re in this together β€
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Thank you for the concernπ It really means a lot!
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So powerful.
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Thank you! β€
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Hey Aditi! Truely penned! Nice to know about your poetry by DPslam, I too got published in the same. π
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Hello, fellow poet! Congratulations!
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Thank you and most welcome.
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